LDS Writer Blogfest: And a Little Child Shall Lead Them


This is part of the LDS Writer Blogfest, which means I’m going to talk about my religion again. (I’m Ben. I’m a writer. And I’m a Mormon.)

But first, and since this is an LDS Writer Blogfest, let me tell you about the book I recently finished drafting. (Don’t worry. It’s not about religion, nor am I totally hijacking the fest.)

The Freezer is set in a hypothetical near-future Earth that’s about to be destroyed by a collision with a rogue planet. There are sub-light-speed interstellar ships and fusion engines, but aside from that, it’s a lot like the world we live in. (Also, that about-to-be-destroyed thing tends to affect the way people think.)

I wrote the final chapter the Saturday before last, mere hours before sitting down to watch the annual LDS General Conference on TV. (I missed the first few minutes because I was putting out a fire. Literally.)

I joined my wife and three kids, who were already watching, right as Boyd K. Packer started to speak. I knew immediately that it was the address I had to talk about here, because it made me teary-eyed, and…

Well, let me get back to The Freezer.

At the beginning of the book, Thane Ryder has a dilemma caused entirely by the fact that he and his wife Dawn had decided to have a baby six years before the end of the world. I mean, it’s the end of the world. Why bother having kids who aren’t going to grow up?

But Dawn was a space-ferry pilot, world famous for saving her ferry from an imminent crash. When the Evacuation Authority needed pilots to land its untested interstellar ships at their destination, she was at the top of the list.

That meant she’d survive. When Earth was destroyed, she’d be safely on her way to a new home.

Dawn, of course, only agreed to go if she could bring her husband and their daughter Mandy. But they wanted Dawn to land the very first ship, which was carrying infrastructure and skilled technical workers. No room for passengers, especially not children.

The Authority offered Thane and Mandy seats on a later flight. The Ryders agreed to the arrangement. Dawn left her little girl in her husband’s care.

And Thane’s dilemma? Two years later when it was time for him to leave, the Evacuation Authority didn’t keep its word. It disqualified Mandy from evacuation. Thane would have to leave her behind. 

A government agency in charge of selecting one person to live from every 120,000 only has to be really good at one thing—saying no. Getting it to reverse the decision, even to keep a promise to a renowned pilot, was impossible.

Thane has to decide between dying with his daughter or following his wife.

It was about the worst position I could put Thane into. And then, being a writer, which means I’m a sado-masochist, (and I mean that in the best possible sense,) I proceeded to make Thane’s life even more difficult.

Should he have even had a child in the first place?

Couldn’t he always have more once he was reunited with his wife?

What about leaving Mandy in the care of someone else so he could leave?

Was a few extra months of comfort for one girl worth his life?

Why not simply end her life a little earlier? (He doesn’t actually consider this. It’s proposed to him as a solution.)

And then things get complicated, opening up even more questions.

Does Mandy really hear what she claims?

Should he trust his little girl or all the grown-ups?

Do you give a girl what she thinks she needs, or what you are pretty sure she needs?

Trust your instincts or do what everyone else thinks you should do?

Is it okay to lie to your child to protect her?

I put my characters through my greatest fears and darkest thoughts. I use them to explore my past as well as my current challenges and fears. And as I’ve written each successive novel, I’ve worked my way through my teen years and my early twenties.

Now here I am, the father of a six-year-old, (and nine- and three-year olds,) in a world not fit for such spirits.

I make Thane answer the questions I don’t want to face, make the mistakes I hope I’ll never make. These are my questions.

And the answers?

That title alone could lead Thane right to the answer he spends the whole book looking for. And as for the others, here are a few of the answers President Packer offers:

"I was stationed in Osaka, Japan, when World War II closed. The city was rubble, and the streets were littered with blocks, debris, and bomb craters. Although most of the trees had been blasted away, some few of them still stood with shattered limbs and trunks and had the courage to send forth a few twigs with leaves. 
A tiny girl dressed in a ragged, colored kimono was busily gathering yellow sycamore leaves into a bouquet. The little child seemed unaware of the devastation that surrounded her as she scrambled over the rubble to add new leaves to her collection. She had found the one beauty left in her world. Perhaps I should say she was the beautiful part of her world. Somehow, to think of her increases my faith. Embodied in the child was hope."

"Long ago a woman tearfully told me that as a college student she had made a serious mistake with her boyfriend. He had arranged for an abortion. In due time they graduated and were married and had several other children. She told me how tormented she now was to look at her family, her beautiful children, and see in her mind the place, empty now, where that one child was missing."

"Husbands and wives should understand that their first calling—from which they will never be released—is to one another and then to their children."

"Twice in our marriage, at the time of the births of two of our little boys, we have had a doctor say, “I do not think you are going to keep this one.” 
Both times this brought the response from us that we would give our lives if our tiny son could keep his. In the course of that offer, it dawned on us that this same devotion is akin to what Heavenly Father feels about each of us."

And the last thing, the one thing that I have to learn over and over again because it seems in direct opposition to all the learning and wisdom of the world:

One of the great discoveries of parenthood is that we learn far more about what really matters from our children than we ever did from our parents. We come to recognize the truth in Isaiah’s prophecy that “a little child shall lead them.” 
In Jerusalem, “Jesus called a little child unto him, and set him in the midst of them, 
“And said, Verily I say unto you, Except ye be converted, and become as little children, ye shall not enter into the kingdom of heaven. 
“Whosoever therefore shall humble himself as this little child, the same is greatest in the kingdom of heaven.”

It’s so easy to see my children’s faults. When they won’t go to sleep, won’t eat their dinner, won’t pick up their toys, and cry and whine and fight—it’s all so obvious. 

What I need to learn—something that I taught Thane but have yet to master myself—is the ability to see what they have, or see, or are that I don’t, can’t, or am not.

And then to learn that good from them. Because that’s the real purpose of parenthood. It’s not to pass on our meager wisdom. It’s to become more like Christ.

Others in the blogfest:

Amanda Sowards
Angie Lofthouse
Britanny Larsen
Cami Checketts
Charity Bradford
Danyelle Ferguson
Giselle Abreu
Julia Keanini
Julie Coulter Bellon
Kasey Tross
Kayeleen Hamblin
Kelly Bryson
Krista Van Dolzer
Laura Johnston
Melanie Stanford
Rachelle Christensen
Rebecca Belliston
Sierra Gardner
Stephanie Worlton


  1. This was a great approach! Your novel sounds fascinating and I like how you tied the talk into it.

  2. Like Charity said, I loved how you tied President Packer's remarks back to your work-in-progress. I'm glad I'm not the only one who constantly makes connections between writing and whatever else I'm doing;)

    I cannot wait to read THE FREEZER, Ben, and I'm not just saying that.

  3. GREAT talk. I used it in part of my blogfest post too! What an interesting premise; thanks for sharing a little about your novel! New follower ;)

  4. Hey, I'm all for hijacking the blogfest to promote your book, especially when it sounds so fascinating! Once I told my mom about an idea I had for a book which addressed some of my fears about losing members of my family and she cut me off, saying that it was bad karma and if I wrote about it, it would happen. I sincerely hope that your book doesn't come true (mostly because it would mean the end of the world...and that would suck...) and that karma is a figment of my mom's imagination.

    I loved this talk as well, and I love that parenting has helped me to understand how much my Heavenly Father loves me, and how absurd it would be for me to think that there was anything that would make Him not love me anymore. Glad I could find you in the blogfest! :-)

  5. It was so hard to choose a talk to focus on. So many of them resonated with me and where I'm at. This one was a particularly good one.

    Thanks for setting what President Packer had to say against your book. It puts a different perspective on what it means for us today.

  6. We are so lucky that the Lord trusted us with these spirits :) I love how you entertwined your book with the ideas from the talk!

  7. Interesting. I read all of that and I still have no idea what he decides. I suspect he renegotiates a bit, but maybe you ride the concept dead straight, and if so I have no idea.

  8. Thanks, Charity.

    Krista, I constantly find ways to connect what I'm writing with everything and anything around me. It's not even difficult to do!

    Glad to have you, Lo. Cheryl Esplin's talk right afterward was wonderful, too.

    Kasey, I've never worried about what I put into my writing. Mentioning how long I've gone without getting a flat tire on my bike, however...I never do that. :)

    Thank you, Kayeleen!

    And thank you, Julia! I agree wholeheartedly.

    And Jaimie, as I usually do, I left out a few important details. Like how Thane has good reason to believe his wife's ship has already been lost. So it's more a decision between a distant hope and a concrete reality. Given that, he can't bring himself to leave his daughter. And then later on he has to make a similar choice and goes the other way. But I'm once again going to leave out the details.

  9. It was a great talk and this is a great post. I can not wait to read this novel. You have me so intrigued.

  10. Oh, I loved that talk. Thanks for sharing your reactions and the teasers about your book. I'm with Krista- I can't wait to read it!

  11. Excellent post. I didn't hear this talk but I loved how you related it to your book and how you learned from it all. It's hard to learn anything sometimes when our kids are just driving us insane, but this talk is such a great reminder how much we can learn from them.

  12. Wow. You're book sounds great. This was such a moving talk. Great post!

  13. Well said, Ben.

    I can't WAIT to read this book of yours. Can't WAIT.


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